The Kane Show (Part 4)

[Anonymous]

Someone else posted:

"Jennifer Lea Morsell: I like that your sharing snippets and these snippets sound like scripts and superficial. Just my opinion."

That surely is not very complimentary. Calling her out for being fake.

[Anonymous]

At least she didn't insult a child in this snippet?

I'm really not sure where she's going with this book. That's a lot of random life experiences to weave together.

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:At least she didn't insult a child in this snippet?

I'm really not sure where she's going with this book. That's a lot of random life experiences to weave together.

There is absolutely no cohesion. The whole "this is an unedited rough draft" thing just sounds like an excuse for poor writing.

[Anonymous]

What gets me is that none of these experiences are really unique or unusual. Everyone has been broken up with at one point or another, lots of people have ended long relationships, etc.

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:What gets me is that none of these experiences are really unique or unusual. Everyone has been broken up with at one point or another, lots of people have ended long relationships, etc.

+1

[Anonymous]

Someone posted a negative comment and Danni jumped all over the person. Sure, she'll ignore the questions from fans, but if anyone offers any criticism, she's on it immediately.

Note: I haven't read the full comments yet, so I don't know if what the person said was constructive or just foolishness.

[Anonymous]

Denise Lynn
I'm gonna b the bad guy here and tell u that no editor will take this on to a publisher. It's bloody awful. You are NOT awful but writing, esp for profit is extremely difficult and few make it. You will be able to self publish but other than the syncophants that follow you I doubt u will sell any books. I hope u prove me wrong but your snippets show no promise. But don't listen to anyone including me and good luck. I do believe u hv talent but not seeing it in literary arts. Keep plugging <3

Danni Starr
Hey Denise I'm writing the book for me and if people want to read it cool. Bloody awful is very nice of you.

Danni Starr
Also Denise Lynn you are the one who told me to remove the "cocoa puff" from my face. Basically you're opinion on my mole and book was horribly rude, and not gonna change a thing. Mole is staying, book still getting written

[Anonymous]

Lol @ "I'm writing a book for me and if people want to read it, cool"...ummmm wasn't she the one asking people what they wanted her to write about??

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:Denise Lynn
I'm gonna b the bad guy here and tell u that no editor will take this on to a publisher. It's bloody awful. You are NOT awful but writing, esp for profit is extremely difficult and few make it. You will be able to self publish but other than the syncophants that follow you I doubt u will sell any books. I hope u prove me wrong but your snippets show no promise. But don't listen to anyone including me and good luck. I do believe u hv talent but not seeing it in literary arts. Keep plugging <3

Danni Starr
Hey Denise I'm writing the book for me and if people want to read it cool. Bloody awful is very nice of you.

Danni Starr
Also Denise Lynn you are the one who told me to remove the "cocoa puff" from my face. Basically you're opinion on my mole and book was horribly rude, and not gonna change a thing. Mole is staying, book still getting written

Love that the girl who constantly preaches about being entitled to her opinion and preaches that people need to learn gracefully can't follow either of those. She can't take criticism.. At all and doesn't respect anyone else's opinion. She also can't lose gracefully, she always has to add her two sense.

[Anonymous]

What happened to "I love criticism"

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:Lol @ "I'm writing a book for me and if people want to read it, cool"...ummmm wasn't she the one asking people what they wanted her to write about??

+1000000 this!!! I was getting ready to write this as I was reading that post of the conversation between Danni and the woman that called her out, but you got there first!

She's just making excuses at this point. When she posted her first snippet and people didn't like it, she said "BUT GUYS IT'S JUST A DRAFT AND UNEDITED, IT'S SUPPOSED TO LOOK THIS WAY". Then when she posted the snippet about the child and people criticized her, she said "YOU GUYS TAKE A JOKE IT'S FUNNY, YOU KNOW HAHA". Now apparently when people tell her that no editor will publish her book and she's probably not going anywhere writing like this, she claims that she's "writing it for herself". Girl is a walking contradiction and it's already gotten old.

[Anonymous]

Remove the "cocoa puff" from my face

Omg this comment gives me life!

[Anonymous]

Even her "fans" don't seem very enthused by her snippets..fewer likes and comments than most of her posts.

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Lol @ "I'm writing a book for me and if people want to read it, cool"...ummmm wasn't she the one asking people what they wanted her to write about??

+1000000 this!!! I was getting ready to write this as I was reading that post of the conversation between Danni and the woman that called her out, but you got there first!

She's just making excuses at this point. When she posted her first snippet and people didn't like it, she said "BUT GUYS IT'S JUST A DRAFT AND UNEDITED, IT'S SUPPOSED TO LOOK THIS WAY". Then when she posted the snippet about the child and people criticized her, she said "YOU GUYS TAKE A JOKE IT'S FUNNY, YOU KNOW HAHA". Now apparently when people tell her that no editor will publish her book and she's probably not going anywhere writing like this, she claims that she's "writing it for herself". Girl is a walking contradiction and it's already gotten old.

+1

Great minds think alike.

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:Denise Lynn
I'm gonna b the bad guy here and tell u that no editor will take this on to a publisher. It's bloody awful. You are NOT awful but writing, esp for profit is extremely difficult and few make it. You will be able to self publish but other than the sycophants that follow you I doubt u will sell any books. I hope u prove me wrong but your snippets show no promise. But don't listen to anyone including me and good luck. I do believe u hv talent but not seeing it in literary arts. Keep plugging <3

Danni Starr
Hey Denise I'm writing the book for me and if people want to read it cool. Bloody awful is very nice of you.

Danni Starr
Also Denise Lynn you are the one who told me to remove the "cocoa puff" from my face. Basically you're opinion on my mole and book was horribly rude, and not gonna change a thing. Mole is staying, book still getting written

If you are going to criticize, first, don't use short hand, and second, check your own spelling.