The Kane Show (Part 4)

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Denise Lynn
I'm gonna b the bad guy here and tell u that no editor will take this on to a publisher. It's bloody awful. You are NOT awful but writing, esp for profit is extremely difficult and few make it. You will be able to self publish but other than the sycophants that follow you I doubt u will sell any books. I hope u prove me wrong but your snippets show no promise. But don't listen to anyone including me and good luck. I do believe u hv talent but not seeing it in literary arts. Keep plugging <3

Danni Starr
Hey Denise I'm writing the book for me and if people want to read it cool. Bloody awful is very nice of you.

Danni Starr
Also Denise Lynn you are the one who told me to remove the "cocoa puff" from my face. Basically you're opinion on my mole and book was horribly rude, and not gonna change a thing. Mole is staying, book still getting written

If you are going to criticize, first, don't use short hand, and second, check your own spelling.

I mean, I get your point, but her message was still valid. And I could see your point more if the person was criticizing Danni's grammar, but she wasn't, she was criticizing her writing style and the content of her writing. Just something to consider.

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:Remove the "cocoa puff" from my face

Omg this comment gives me life!

Yes! OMG!!

[Anonymous]

"You're opinion" from someone who is writing a book IS bloody awful.

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:"You're opinion" from someone who is writing a book IS bloody awful.

Guys!!! Everything she writes is a rough, unedited snippet draft.

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:"You're opinion" from someone who is writing a book IS bloody awful.

Guys!!! Everything she writes is a rough, unedited snippet draft.

Her Facebook comments and replies are also rough, unedited drafts, it seems.

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:"You're opinion" from someone who is writing a book IS bloody awful.

Guys!!! Everything she writes is a rough, unedited snippet draft.

Her Facebook comments and replies are also rough, unedited drafts, it seems.

yes they are..I was just making a joke that if anyone called her on it, she'd say her comments are unedited, too!

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Lol @ "I'm writing a book for me and if people want to read it, cool"...ummmm wasn't she the one asking people what they wanted her to write about??

+1000000 this!!! I was getting ready to write this as I was reading that post of the conversation between Danni and the woman that called her out, but you got there first!

She's just making excuses at this point. When she posted her first snippet and people didn't like it, she said "BUT GUYS IT'S JUST A DRAFT AND UNEDITED, IT'S SUPPOSED TO LOOK THIS WAY". Then when she posted the snippet about the child and people criticized her, she said "YOU GUYS TAKE A JOKE IT'S FUNNY, YOU KNOW HAHA". Now apparently when people tell her that no editor will publish her book and she's probably not going anywhere writing like this, she claims that she's "writing it for herself". Girl is a walking contradiction and it's already gotten old.

Agreed. I think she has borderline personality disorder

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:Oh man someone commented asking if Danni is willing to speak at a career day at an elementary school... Would love to be a fly on the wall for that one

"I was a ratchet, psychotic, angry woman on two reality shows - bridezillas and marriage boot camp. I was just fired from syndicated top morning talk show. I make commercials for cleaning products on TLC." Yea that's really what I want my adolescent to hear...

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:The KANE Show
6 hrs ·
You come out from the mall on a nice Saturday afternoon & see someone has parked like this against your car. Do u leave a note? Just drive away? Something else? I won't judge, just curious..



Scott Dano You wake up on a nice Monday morning & hear someone is missing from your favorite morning show. Do u leave a note? Just drive away? Something else? I won't judge, just curious..
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Number of likes Kane got on this photo: 212
Number of likes Scott's comment got: 241

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Number of likes Kane got on this photo: 250
Number of likes Scott's comment got: 359

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:The KANE Show
6 hrs ·
You come out from the mall on a nice Saturday afternoon & see someone has parked like this against your car. Do u leave a note? Just drive away? Something else? I won't judge, just curious..



Scott Dano You wake up on a nice Monday morning & hear someone is missing from your favorite morning show. Do u leave a note? Just drive away? Something else? I won't judge, just curious..
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Number of likes Kane got on this photo: 212
Number of likes Scott's comment got: 241

Update..

Number of likes Kane got on this photo: 250
Number of likes Scott's comment got: 359

Ha! That's a good one. Most of the time when Kane makes a post he gets ripped on these days. It's quite entertaining.

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Oh man someone commented asking if Danni is willing to speak at a career day at an elementary school... Would love to be a fly on the wall for that one

"I was a ratchet, psychotic, angry woman on two reality shows - bridezillas and marriage boot camp. I was just fired from syndicated top morning talk show. I make commercials for cleaning products on TLC." Yea that's really what I want my adolescent to hear...

[Anonymous]

Lol at Danni's comment that she writes the way she speaks.

We know, Danni. Believe me, we know.

[Anonymous]

Danni's love life choices are making more and more sense. The men she likes seem to be total tools/losers (including her current bouncer/aspiring actor guy) that just aren't that into her. So she settled for a nice guy, that of course she ended up divorcing because he wasn't passionate enough. What a train wreck.

[Anonymous]

Danni is a total hypocrite. If Slim was seeing someone and bringing her around the girls/posting about it on social media she would absolutely lose her shit. I don't even want to think what she would say if Slim posted a video of his new girlfriend tickling one of the girls in a bed.

[Anonymous]

Can someone please tell Sarah she's in her 30s and a top knot on top of her head is more befitting a 3 year old? Seriously she looked ridiculous! (Pics are on her IG). Makes me sad because I love her but half the time her hair/makeup looks soooo bad.