Ouch! I really feel your last paragraph. That weighs on me too. But don't let it eat at you, and don't let it make you hide your work from others in the future. Maybe this story will wake some people up and bring back the true professionals. |
+1000 |
Maybe it's a through line in the author's life? |
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Yup 12:50 I (the pp) agree. I've been in several writing workshops, though long ago because I can't stomach them now. There is no way I would read this and say it was anywhere near finished. She didn't even vary her sentence length - it was really blah.
I've read so much on this, I can't keep it straight...but somewhere it said that Larson wanted Chuntao to be unsympathetic to act as a purity test for white readers to see if they would automatically resonate with Rose. In my mind, it even failed that. Chuntao wasn't that unlikable and didn't possess any agency or kickass assuredness (hmm, like Ng maybe) that you love to hate. Nope. So many wonderful unpublished writers out there, and this. SMH. |
I think you are right. Really thoughtful post. Awhile ago, long before this story, I saw an interesting discussion about how a lot of current bourgeois liberal DEI efforts and language are strongly anti-union and anti-working-class, because the bourgeois promoters of that rhetoric are actually deeply invested in preventing solidarity across working class racially divided populations. In other words, if you engage in dialogue that fosters suspicion amongst race-divided groups, they will never be strong enough together to truly change the class structures that overwhelmingly favor the bourgeois who are promoting the DEI rhetoric. Being a Good White Person (or in the case of Gay, a Good Black Person) is actually a way of killing any chance of changing the societal class structures that actually prevent many poor people of all races from significant life improvement. I am not sure what to think about all of that (like many discussions of race, it is, to my mind, interesting but not complete), but I feel like I see elements of the above in the behavior of the Chunky Monkeys. They don't care about race, not really. But they care extremely deeply about maintaining their power as against a working class interloper who is scrabbling into their exclusive world. Hence the suggestion of the white writers to weaponize race to keep a working class writer down, and why Ng and Gay, two wealth and influential POC, were so willing to use race so cynically. Viewed from a world in which they desperately want to slam the door shut to any threats to their wealth and influence, their actions have a twisted consistency. |
| Is Kolker the victim now? He didn't want to pursue but what was he going to do -- there was a white woman in tears, lord help him. |
You are clueless. What Larsen did is plagiarism. At least Dorland did donate a kidney. Larsen has caused a lot of pain and trauma. She's such a lovely person that I'd bet she's proud of that. So many people participated in this vile bullying and not one of them acted like an adult and spoke up against it. There's no evidence that any of these creeps tried to point out to Larsen that she was acting in an obsessive unhealthy manner. These writing groups are clearly nasty pits of vipers. |
| I saw on Twitter that it was actually Larson who talked with Kolker first, not Dorland, so yet one more fact now in dispute. Is there any merit to this? |
She clearly had egg on her face with that one. |
Here I am so interested in this story but Larson is no writer. No wonder she had to do something cruel to get attention. That story so boring. The subject should be interesting but she makes it dull with no real talent for dialog. Wow. What a b***** |
Jesus. What a terrible person he is also turning out to be. |
| I don’t love Ng as a writer either. So feel sorry for me. But at least people read her stuff. Larson the worst wanna be. |