
Well said!!!!!! |
You're making a lot of very incorrect assumptions. 1. The essays are really fluffy, short paragraphs about Portrait of a Graduate skills. They're not exactly rhetorical analysis or anything profound. I would hope that almost every 8th grade honors student can throw together a few coherent sentences about a time they advocated for themselves, a time they showed some leadership, the famous person they admire most, etc. Some kids are likely uncomfortable with bragging about themselves and understate any achievements. Others assume that they won't be fact checked and lie. 2. You're assuming that writing ability is being evaluated, rather than content. You're also assuming that the evaluation of the content isn't incredibly subjective. For example, let's imagine that the kids are given the prompt: "You're sure that the teacher graded your exam incorrectly. How would you advocate for yourself?" Some graders might decide that the best answer is to approach the teacher and try to explain why your solution is correct. Others might decide that the kid who answers that they would let it go, but study harder for the next test to ensure that their grades remain high is showing some resilience or something. But most importantly: 3. You're assuming that there's some huge gap between the writing abilities of the kids who are admitted and those who aren't. At a school like Longfellow, it's likely that there are 100 kids who all have 4.0s and are strong writers. Both the slightly above average privileged kids and the outliers will all look the same and will all be bunched at the top of the scoring range. It's likely that the selection of the kids at the TJ feeders is more based on the biases of the person who graded the essay and less based on the actual merits of the kid. The margins are so slim that even a tiny difference in essay grading is the difference between being admitted and being far down the waitlist. |
DP and if those are the families kids who want to put all their efforts and time into studying at the expense of other things, then sure, let it be 100%. I am white and don't care. |
You are making a number of assumptions here and you appear to not really understand the importance of writing skills and how they are judged. I get that your lack of understanding leads you to think that essay writing is “fluffy” and graded in a way that you fear is subjective. But here’s the thing: writing is extremely important in STEM fields because many who are talented in STEM subjects are may not have a robust ability to convey their thoughts to others. In other words, it’s not enough to be able to “do the math,” you must be able to write about it as well. |
It is foolish to assume the entire application pool is of same caliber, and applicants should be selected proportionally and randomly. Previously the best were chosen based on merit, irrespective of the applicant pool split by skin color. Now with skin color consideration, it's forced to reflect the applicant pool, while disregarding merit. Hence the decline in academic performance, not due to the pandemic or other nonsensical unrelated reasons. |
Why is TJ admitting kids with inferior math skills to get to predetermined diversity chart? Prior to admission change, there was one TJ Math 1 class with around 17 students. After admissions change, for each of last four years, there are four to five TJ Math 1 sections with around 120 students enrolled in them. Does this have anything to do with the lowered number of NMSF recipients? |
I'm sorry that you have such poor reading comprehension that your response wasn't even vaguely responsive to any of the points I made. Writing marginally and almost indistinguishably better than another kid for canned PoG prompts doesn't show much of anything. A few years ago, when they published some profiles on the new students, a clearly and obviously unqualified girl was admitted because she wrote about how much she loved Michelle Obama. Essays like that are neither indicative of STEM talent nor writing talent, especially when they are so easily coached by the prep companies. If they want to give the kids an AP-like DBQ essay, I'm all for that. At least the kids would need to analyze some texts and provide a much more complex essay, rather than memorizing and regurgitating PoG talking points. Also, if TJ wants the "whole package," their approach is idiotic since they're doing nothing to ensure that the kid has any real math or science skills. |
Good to hear. If the admission change has slowed the Road to Nowhere, that's good for everyone. |
Your answer further demonstrates your lack of understanding of the importance of writing and your fears as to how the essays are graded. More importantly, your answer reveals your obvious agenda. |
Since you're obviously the most brilliant person in the room, please explain to everyone how my posts demonstrate any of that. You've provided attacks and generic, non-responsive statements twice. Please dazzle all of us with your intellectual prowess as to the immense depth of the PoG essays and how they are so perfectly predictive of math and writing aptitude. |
You seem very triggered by someone calling out your agenda. Interesting. |
+1 |
“AsK yOuRsElF” We don’t need any q-anon conspiracy theories. GTFO. They opened up spots to all middle schools. Not just a handful of affluent schools. |
The admission policy is race blind. When you have RWNJ, Koch-affiliated orgs like PDE pushing hard you know it’s election time. |
I don't have an agenda. I think selecting students for an elite STEM school primarily through generic PoG essays is idiotic. I also think that schools like Longfellow will have 100+ kids with nearly the same score, making it impossible to differentiate between the brilliant kids and the pretty run of the mill privileged kids. Why are you so triggered that you start hurling insults, accusing people of an agenda, and refusing to address any posted arguments the moment anyone criticized the TJ admissions process? |