Activities question

Anonymous
Is it true you shouldn't complete all 10 activities on the list, and try and layer into fewer entries?
Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:lots of resources out there. think someone is having a free webinar this week too.

https://news.meritmore.com/hacking-the-activities-section-of-the-common-app/

https://www.crimsoneducation.org/us/blog/how-to-arrange-your-activities-list-on-the-common-app/

https://www.shemmassianconsulting.com/blog/common-app-activities-section


There's good advice in some of these links.

DO make the most of your 150 characters. This 1 tip is exactly 149 characters long. Use every inch to demonstrate your impact beyond the classroom.

DO list your most impressive and relevant activities near the top. In the event that an admissions officer only skims your activities page, you’ll want to ensure the first few items are the most compelling.

DO include a grade level when listing a club title. If you were Treasurer of the National Honor Society in 11th grade and President in 12th, just listing “Treasurer and President” is too vague. Let admissions officers see your leadership progression by typing “Treasurer (11), President (12).”

DO choose a different word at the beginning of each description line. Vary your vocabulary to bring linguistic interest to your list, and avoid vague words that don’t reveal any particular skill. Implemented, collaborated, designed, coached, led, coordinated, and researched are some of our favorites.

DO use present tense for activities that are ongoing and past tense for those that have concluded. For example, if you are no longer a member of the school orchestra, you “played cello with zeal.” If you’re still involved, you “play.”

DO keep your punctuation consistent. If you opt to end one of your descriptions with a period, make sure they all conclude that way.

DO give specific details about your club, rather than providing a general explanation. For example, if you helped with fundraising efforts through Key Club, also mention the actual amount of money you raised in addition to the name of the charity that received the funds.

DO consider combining similar activities. If you don’t have room to list all of your most significant clubs, try grouping similar activities on the same line. “Animal Hospital Volunteer and Pet Sitter” both showcase your love and care for furry creatures.

DO inject some personality into your descriptions. Admissions officers know what “soccer” is, so instead of describing it as “Played games with my team and competed in weekly events,” why not describe the activity with a sense of humor or mention how you enjoy the camaraderie and sportsmanship aspects of the game the most?

DO think outside the box for which activities to list. You are not limited to only including school-sponsored clubs and organizations. If you spend 10 hours per week babysitting at home – list it! If you enjoy tinkering with computers in your spare time – that counts, too!

DON’T waste space by writing an impersonal description. “Member of robotics team that actively participates in regional and championship competitions” reveals nothing new about you. Show admissions officers your personal contribution to the team or how you directly impacted the club’s performance.

DON’T check “yes” for the “I intend to participate in a similar activity in college” question for all of your activities. Unless you genuinely want to engage in those types of organizations in the future, you should mark down the occasional “no.” A long list of “yeses” can look awfully suspicious.

DON’T provide scant descriptions for your clubs and activities or type “see attached résumé.” Follow the rules and complete the activities page as fully as possible. Many colleges don’t allow students to upload separate résumés anyway, and those that do may have little time to review them.

DON’T exaggerate your time commitments. Admissions officers know you need to sleep, and they also know that most clubs meet an average of one hour per week. Be truthful, and don’t embroider the facts.

DON’T feel bad if you have fewer than 10 activities to list on the Common Application. Admissions officers favor depth over breadth, so it’s perfectly all right if you’ve left a few blank lines at the end of the page. As long as your other activities are well-documented and robust in their own right, listing just a handful of clubs/organizations is okay!
Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:Some good examples:

Activities List Example 2: Student Admitted to Northwestern Class of 2028

1. Athletics: Synchronized Swimming, 3x Int’l Medalist, 7x Nat’l Medalist
20 hr/wk, 46 wk/yr. Premiere state team; elite top 3 nat’l team; US Jr Olympics 2022 - Gold x3, Silver; US Nationals 2022 - Bronze; 2023: Silver, Bronze; leadership award

2. Research: Prevalence of Anxiety/Depression in Artistic Swimmers 13-18
2 hr/wk, 36 wk/yr. Study author. Design/analyze survey of medicated depression 8.5% athletes vs 16% gen teens (p<.05); poster presentation; submitted NHSJS

3. Volunteer: Accredited SAT & Math Tutor, Free Online Int’l Peer Tutoring
1 hr/wk, 20 wk/yr. Facilitate critical thinking skills; mentor/enlighten 52 learners, 18 countries; assist in raising SAT scores on avg. by 50 pts

4. Social Justice: Founder & Fundraiser, Paws of Ukraine
1 hr/wk, 26 wk/yr. Aid war-displaced animals. Launch/manage non-profit; fundraise; crochet 100 collars/toys; 3 fairs, feature on UAnimals webpage; raised > $2000

5. Work: Private Artistic Swim Coach/Camp Counselor
1 hr/wk, 40 wk/yr. Coach 12 athletes' skill development up 2 levels; mentor 60 preteens to foster creativity/growth mindset; instill a passion for learning/exploration

6. Tech: Opi-O-Scope Prototype Developer, Stanford Clinical Neurosci Immersion
30 hr/wk, 2 wk/yr. Capstone project of AI injectable nanobot monitoring neurotransmitter levels to prevent opioid relapses; prototype development offer.

7. Career: Econ & Leadership Ambassador, Econ for Leaders 2023
30 hr/wk, 1 wk/yr. Selected to promote econ. education; enhance leadership/public speaking skills; network; integrate econ. analysis/decision-making; social media promotion

8. Academic: Author of Academic Papers on Mental Health
4 hr/wk, 12 wk/yr. Published: [redacted]. Criticize policies on access to rural health care; analyze US history of mental health stigma; explore correlation of social media & mental health

9. Foreign Language: Ukrainian; Ukrainian Catholic University & Duolingo
2 hr/wk, 46 wk/yr. Master Duolingo in 6 months; increasing proficiency with weekly online tutor, including discussions of history, culture, and politics of region

10. Athletics: Swim, Long Distance Free and Relay Athlete, Varsity Swim Team
4 hr/wk, 12 wk/yr. Region champs 2022; endurance specialist; contribute personal best 200(2:10:06) and 500(5:45:40) free; collaborate on relays; inflate morale


Working on activities in CA today and this came in handy!
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Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:
Anonymous wrote:lots of resources out there. think someone is having a free webinar this week too.

https://news.meritmore.com/hacking-the-activities-section-of-the-common-app/

https://www.crimsoneducation.org/us/blog/how-to-arrange-your-activities-list-on-the-common-app/

https://www.shemmassianconsulting.com/blog/common-app-activities-section


There's good advice in some of these links.

DO make the most of your 150 characters. This 1 tip is exactly 149 characters long. Use every inch to demonstrate your impact beyond the classroom.

DO list your most impressive and relevant activities near the top. In the event that an admissions officer only skims your activities page, you’ll want to ensure the first few items are the most compelling.

DO include a grade level when listing a club title. If you were Treasurer of the National Honor Society in 11th grade and President in 12th, just listing “Treasurer and President” is too vague. Let admissions officers see your leadership progression by typing “Treasurer (11), President (12).”

DO choose a different word at the beginning of each description line. Vary your vocabulary to bring linguistic interest to your list, and avoid vague words that don’t reveal any particular skill. Implemented, collaborated, designed, coached, led, coordinated, and researched are some of our favorites.

DO use present tense for activities that are ongoing and past tense for those that have concluded. For example, if you are no longer a member of the school orchestra, you “played cello with zeal.” If you’re still involved, you “play.”

DO keep your punctuation consistent. If you opt to end one of your descriptions with a period, make sure they all conclude that way.

DO give specific details about your club, rather than providing a general explanation. For example, if you helped with fundraising efforts through Key Club, also mention the actual amount of money you raised in addition to the name of the charity that received the funds.

DO consider combining similar activities. If you don’t have room to list all of your most significant clubs, try grouping similar activities on the same line. “Animal Hospital Volunteer and Pet Sitter” both showcase your love and care for furry creatures.

DO inject some personality into your descriptions. Admissions officers know what “soccer” is, so instead of describing it as “Played games with my team and competed in weekly events,” why not describe the activity with a sense of humor or mention how you enjoy the camaraderie and sportsmanship aspects of the game the most?

DO think outside the box for which activities to list. You are not limited to only including school-sponsored clubs and organizations. If you spend 10 hours per week babysitting at home – list it! If you enjoy tinkering with computers in your spare time – that counts, too!

DON’T waste space by writing an impersonal description. “Member of robotics team that actively participates in regional and championship competitions” reveals nothing new about you. Show admissions officers your personal contribution to the team or how you directly impacted the club’s performance.

DON’T check “yes” for the “I intend to participate in a similar activity in college” question for all of your activities. Unless you genuinely want to engage in those types of organizations in the future, you should mark down the occasional “no.” A long list of “yeses” can look awfully suspicious.

DON’T provide scant descriptions for your clubs and activities or type “see attached résumé.” Follow the rules and complete the activities page as fully as possible. Many colleges don’t allow students to upload separate résumés anyway, and those that do may have little time to review them.

DON’T exaggerate your time commitments. Admissions officers know you need to sleep, and they also know that most clubs meet an average of one hour per week. Be truthful, and don’t embroider the facts.

DON’T feel bad if you have fewer than 10 activities to list on the Common Application. Admissions officers favor depth over breadth, so it’s perfectly all right if you’ve left a few blank lines at the end of the page. As long as your other activities are well-documented and robust in their own right, listing just a handful of clubs/organizations is okay!


this is all great advice. Kid needs to revise some of the 10 ECs to use some of these verbs.
Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:Crimson has good templates/examples. Another one:

Activities List Example 1: Student Admitted to Stanford Class of 2028

1. Volunteer: City Department of Sustainability (only youth member)
16 hr/wk, 24 wk/yr. Developed cultural food distribution strategies for the city’s first Food Plan. Built 2 cultural gardens with 12 types of crop, 50+ Ibs food harvested

2. Capstone: Founder & President, SmartSustainableCities
12 hr/wk, 40 wk/yr. Nonprofit w/ 6 intl. chapters, 90+ members. Spoke at 3 UN conferences about smart transit equity; created 2 city plans promoting walkability.

3. Cultural: Youth intern, National Museum of Asian Art
8 hr/wk, 10 wk/yr. Learned x-ray based analysis and paper conservation techniques w/ archival records. Studied Japanese art curation methods.

4. Research: Student Researcher, George Mason University
30 hr/wk, 8 wk/yr. Researched relationship b/w freeway capping & gentrification through statistical modeling; paper under review at Transportation Research Board.

5. Student Govt: Elected Chair Ambassador (1 of 32), City Youth Council
6 hr/wk, 36 wk/yr. Rep’d 200k+ youth. Directed policy initiatives on homelessness; Curated national workshop for BIPOC-owned businesses: 70+ attendees

6. Volunteer: Intern, Asian American Resource Center
6 hr/wk, 24 wk/yr. Curated youth program on cultural education w/ 16 participants and 3k in funding. Led an intergenerational storytelling event w/ 80+ attendees

7. Debate: Co-Novice Coordinator, Speech & Debate Team
12 hr/wk, 36 wk/yr. Ranked top 5 LD debaters in state. Created/ taught 1:1 curriculum w/ 6 students; debated Asian American critical race arguments

8. Research: Student Researcher, UC Santa Cruz Summer Internship Program
20 hr/wk, 8 wk/yr. Developed code book from 11 interviews w/ members of Black nonprofits. Presented impact of land-based, Black resistance on contemporary racial justice

9. Research: Student Researcher, UT Austin
4 hr/wk, 26 wk/yr. Researched the impact of China’s Belt and Road Initiative on 8 Indigenous communities in the Pacific; published 3 Op-Eds on Indigeneity in geopolitics.

10. Other: Photographer
2 hr/wk, 40 wk/yr. Curated 5 photo-essays w/ 10+ pictures each; created online exhibit w/ 80+ views on involuntary displacement, urban sprawl, and parking in city


Lots of volunteer? And so high up? School leadership is lower on the list.
Not what I'd expect.
Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:
Anonymous wrote:
Anonymous wrote:This is stressing me out. My kid has pretty good EC’s, or so I thought, but you read these examples and don’t feel it’s enough. Boy, what ever happened to just being a teen and goofing off. Now it’s all about what looks good for colleges. Do kids even care about half these EC’s they do! Sad.


All this BS only really matters if you are targeting T30 schools. Below that, no one cares. Focus on one of two ECs - doesn't matter what they are.. could be knitting at home or looking for mushrooms in your backyard- but make sure to show in your essays have that activity impacted you, changed you as a person/enhanced your worldview and what you gave to that community.


+1 My son's only activities were a short stint on stage crew (only at-school EC), volunteering at our church, playing guitar (private lessons, playing occasionally at church), golfing. Also listed a 1-week summer data science program he did at a college. He got in to all the big state schools he applied to except for UVA, which I knew was never happening anyway just based on class rank.

He also had a 1500 SAT, a lot of APs, 4.2 weighted GPA with all As in junior year (upward trend, 9th grade wasn't great). He's happy at Virginia Tech.


Curious if your kid got into W&M?
Anonymous
Should activities be listed in quantifiable impact (like the detail above), or something more creative, narrative based that might show personality more than quantifiable impact?
Anonymous
I think it should be a mix.

Should each entry start with “I” or more like a resume?
Anonymous
Ok this was fun. I revised some of my kids' entries to make them "fun" and unique.
Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:Ok this was fun. I revised some of my kids' entries to make them "fun" and unique.


Love the honesty. I basically rewrote my kid's activities section too. I relished the challenge of making those 150 characters count.
Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:I think it should be a mix.

Should each entry start with “I” or more like a resume?

Like a resume.
Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:
Anonymous wrote:Ok this was fun. I revised some of my kids' entries to make them "fun" and unique.


Love the honesty. I basically rewrote my kid's activities section too. I relished the challenge of making those 150 characters count.


lol
Anonymous
Bump
Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:Bump

Why tho
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