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Anonymous
I need tips on how to write thank you note to my bosses. I want to include how thankful I am for their flexibility and trust they put in me and for the oppertunity of employment. They are truly amazing. It sucks that they are moving on. We are all very sad to have our working relationship end!
I suck with putting my thoughts into words. Please help
Anonymous
Dear So and so,

While I am sad to see our working relationship come to an end, I can't help but feel grateful to you for allowing me to care for Timmy and Larla. I have loved every moment of my time with them.
I can't thank you enough for placing your trust in me.
I have enjoyed working for you and would absolutely love keep and contact and babysit the children often!
Anonymous
*love to keep
Anonymous
OP, be sure to spell check your note before writing it.
Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:Dear So and so,

While I am sad to see our working relationship come to an end, I can't help but feel grateful to you for allowing me to care for Timmy and Larla. I have loved every moment of my time with them.
I can't thank you enough for placing your trust in me.
I have enjoyed working for you and would absolutely love keep and contact and babysit the children often!


Professional writer here. OP, do not begin each sentence with "I". Also, note that in the above example, despite the fact that this is supposed to be a thank you note, nowhere in it do the words "thank you" actually appear. Other than that, it's pretty good.
Anonymous
It said I can't thank you enough. Is that not a thank you ?
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