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[quote=Anonymous][quote=Anonymous]Man gets a new job and has a coworker who is so beautiful, he asks her out immediately. She declines because she has a boyfriend. He continues to ask for 2 years. She eventually says yes, and they marry within 6 months. They are celebrating their 35th anniversary this year.[/quote]

Ummmm..this isn't at all appealing to me as cute, based on your description. He starts hitting on someone ("immediately") at work? That's inappropriate and shows a lack of self-control. And also, it was only because of her looks? 
Then the man continues to ask for 2 years? Does not accept the woman's refusal for 2 years? Also creepy/smothering. 
She finally says yes...and they live happily ever after? I don't begrudge them their 35 years of marriage, but being married for 35 years doesn't necessarily mean it's been romantic enough to offset the weird 2-year beginning.
PP, is this your own 'love story'? If so, you need to work on your delivery. The man in question doesn't sound at all appealing enough for a 'cute love story.' Maybe there are a lot more layers (e.g. 'after two years, they had worked through so many tough times at their organization that she saw how adversity brought out his strong traits; and by then they had uncovered so many common interests that she saw him as her soul mate"). But that's not what you wrote, so ...it doesn't come across so well.[/quote]

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