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Likewise, students shouldn’t write about being first chair violin in orchestra.
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The essay is an opportunity to showcase core values, service to others etc.
Not “I practiced so much I improved to first chair”, got the lead in the school play, or earned captain, in this case. Perhaps this is mostly because this is ALREADY INCLUDED IN THE EC SECTION. Why waste words saying it twice? |
But they can have an essay that uses their experience with violin to answer a prompt and can mention that they made it to first chair, but it's included as part of their narrative, not as the main idea. |
I’m guessing you’re not on the admissions committee at an Ivy, are you? The world is a different place today, PP. |
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