And "If your essay does not make them feel something powerful and deep for you" in the 45 seconds they read the essay, you are doomed. So definitely hire this counselor, who makes sure "AO's feel something powerful and deep for you". |
Regular kids. Sure. Excellent stats and full pay. Regular only on this board. |
Didn't use that counselor (but someone else) and think that's why my DC got into 4 T20s last cycle test optional. Everyone who read the essay said it made them gasp/cry or some other reaction. I don't think its bad advice. The personal essays (and the supps really) are VERY important at any private T20. |
It's not the emotional response itself, per se -- it's that an emotional connection to the applicant can be a very powerful x factor. |
. Don't have all the intel but anecdotally many kids peers applied to Vandy ED and none got in from our MCPS Public. Only a few from area privates from what I can see online. And as per discussion above 0 Duke. With that said, the other admits are stellar and beats any area privates that I can see. Just not those 2. |
All biosciences are female-dominated. Be careful what you call STEM. |
| My oldest son got into multiple unhooked- 3 T10s and 3 T20s. He’s at an Ivy (2024 HS). |
^ oh and didn’t use a private counselor or essay coach. |
You don’t “apply for history” at Vanderbilt. That’s not a thing. Probably at any school, but definitely not at Vanderbilt |
What? No, being Asian is not a hook |
Correct. You don't apply for a major. You are a history applicant. Your application is "read" (in committee) as an applicant for a history major - or whatever major you list. Ofc, you aren't assigned to history when admitted....but your ECs are likely not compelling for your application if it doesn't tell a story. |
This is it. Essays are an opportunity for the applicant to connect to the AO as, and I hate to say it this way but it is the best I can do, their authentic self. And then the AO can decide if the school benefits from admitting them. My DS was not Top 20 level, but his essays, which were candid and matter of fact, got him admitted to nearly all Top 30 to 50 schools to which he applied. There was no melodrama, just this is who I am and what I have experienced. Maybe, it is different for Top 20, but I doubt it. |
I would think essays (together with letters and exotic ECs and awards) don’t matter nearly as much below the top 20-30. Of course, they still have to be okay. |
| If your kid wants to ed at vandy, I would spend a lot of time on the website looking at departmental offerings. I'd definitely lean into history. If I remember correctly, there were some new majors offered at vandy, I think one new major was related to us history with a justice lens? Take a look and see if your kid can align/connect his classes, ec and upcoming summer with that angle. And mention this interest in the essay. Last cycle, the essay topic was related to their motto of dare to grow. Think about how you can lean into that. I'll also add that the kids to get into vandy from our private are full pay, very social/good leadership, and strong stats. Good luck! |
| ND, Georgetown, WashU ED ,Emory ED, Vandy ED, Rice ED. The publics. |