Would it bother you if nearly everything your dc's elementary principal

Anonymous
wrote or posted on the school website had grammatical errors, poor punctuation, etc.? It bugs me.
This is FCPS btw.
Anonymous
YES! It would bother me very much.
Anonymous
Hell yes. I would print it out, mark it up in red pen, and then mail it anonymously to her. Each time.
Anonymous
Goodness. It bothers me when it's DCUM. If it's the principal, it would drive me to drink.
Anonymous
OP: here is the latest example that pushed me over the edge. I really feel like this is so poorly-written!

http://www.fcps.edu/VirginiaRunES/StaffUpdate2013.pdf
Anonymous
Yes, very poorly written indeed.
Anonymous
Wow -- that's not nearly as bad as I was expecting. Get a hobby.
Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:wrote or posted on the school website had grammatical errors, poor punctuation, etc.? It bugs me.
This is FCPS btw.


I'd be happy to get any communication out of our principal. She operates in a Cone of Silence.
Anonymous
Yeah, that memo didn't bother me at all.
Anonymous
It's not well written, but it does show that the principal was reaching out to parents over the summer. To me, that ought to outweigh the awkward phrasing.
Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:Yeah, that memo didn't bother me at all.


seemed fine to me also.
Anonymous
All I could find was a misplaced comma or two. She should be commended for writing a letter with all the information in it. The principal at my kids' school never did that.
Anonymous
That was not what I was expecting. Didn't seem that bad.
Anonymous
Anonymous wrote:All I could find was a misplaced comma or two. She should be commended for writing a letter with all the information in it. The principal at my kids' school never did that.


This. Also, she capitalized the start of a parenthetical phrase within a sentence. Should we take her out back and shoot her?

Honestly, you need to get a life. There is nothing egregious about this memo.

Signed, someone who writes/edits for a living but who realizes that most other people (including principals and teachers) do not.
Anonymous
There are comma errors, a subject verb agreement error, and proof reading errors. I teach writing so they stuck out to me, but really, the average reader won't and shouldn't be bothered.
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