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wrote or posted on the school website had grammatical errors, poor punctuation, etc.? It bugs me.
This is FCPS btw. |
| YES! It would bother me very much. |
| Hell yes. I would print it out, mark it up in red pen, and then mail it anonymously to her. Each time. |
| Goodness. It bothers me when it's DCUM. If it's the principal, it would drive me to drink. |
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OP: here is the latest example that pushed me over the edge. I really feel like this is so poorly-written!
http://www.fcps.edu/VirginiaRunES/StaffUpdate2013.pdf |
| Yes, very poorly written indeed. |
| Wow -- that's not nearly as bad as I was expecting. Get a hobby. |
I'd be happy to get any communication out of our principal. She operates in a Cone of Silence. |
| Yeah, that memo didn't bother me at all. |
| It's not well written, but it does show that the principal was reaching out to parents over the summer. To me, that ought to outweigh the awkward phrasing. |
seemed fine to me also. |
| All I could find was a misplaced comma or two. She should be commended for writing a letter with all the information in it. The principal at my kids' school never did that. |
| That was not what I was expecting. Didn't seem that bad. |
This. Also, she capitalized the start of a parenthetical phrase within a sentence. Should we take her out back and shoot her? Honestly, you need to get a life. There is nothing egregious about this memo. Signed, someone who writes/edits for a living but who realizes that most other people (including principals and teachers) do not. |
| There are comma errors, a subject verb agreement error, and proof reading errors. I teach writing so they stuck out to me, but really, the average reader won't and shouldn't be bothered. |