College Essays Are An Important Factor

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!

Amateur hour is over. To the intelligent reader, grammar mistakes are no joke on a college essay. It may not be a final death knell but will certainly raise an eyebrow.

https://www.c2educate.com/blog/10-grammar-mistakes-that-hurt-college-apps-and-all-other-writing/

https://www.princetonreview.com/college-advice/college-essay-grammar-checklist

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:I am sure we'll soon hear how somebody included their pint rest page instead of an essay and got into Harvard. And it was of Obama and Trump photos facing each other... Or some other copy and paste "contemporary art." College admission is becoming enchanted with nonsensical just as our society is today.

Huh? I KNOW you aren't casting stones! LOL!!!

[Anonymous]

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Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!

well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.

Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!

well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.

Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.

? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:I am sure we'll soon hear how somebody included their pint rest page instead of an essay and got into Harvard. And it was of Obama and Trump photos facing each other... Or some other copy and paste "contemporary art." College admission is becoming enchanted with nonsensical just as our society is today.

Huh? I KNOW you aren't casting stones! LOL!!!

If that happens, those who have the gold make the rules. In addition to us, will you be reaching out to Harvard to vigorously let them know how disenchanted you are at this behavior?

[Anonymous]

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Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!

well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.

Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.

? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).

What girl? Do you have a link? Does anybody ever provide some proof, good or bad?

[Anonymous]

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Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!

well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.

Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.

? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).

What girl? Do you have a link? Does anybody ever provide some proof, good or bad?

c'mon. Google it. This came out a couple of months ago.

[Anonymous]

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Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!

well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.

Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.

? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).

What girl? Do you have a link? Does anybody ever provide some proof, good or bad?

Here's the essay. I'll bet a few readers here have no clue who are Pavlov's dogs which demonstrates the student was well read. Humorous essay.

https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/grade-point/wp/2017/06/04/the-papa-johns-pizza-admissions-essay-that-yale-loved/?utm_term=.5293d08a37bb#annotations:11961494

[Anonymous]

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Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!

well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.

Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.

? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).

What girl? Do you have a link? Does anybody ever provide some proof, good or bad?

c'mon. Google it. This came out a couple of months ago.

Done.

[Anonymous]

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:I am sure we'll soon hear how somebody included their pint rest page instead of an essay and got into Harvard. And it was of Obama and Trump photos facing each other... Or some other copy and paste "contemporary art." College admission is becoming enchanted with nonsensical just as our society is today.

Huh? I KNOW you aren't casting stones! LOL!!!

I aim to please! LOL. Glad that smart are en force on DCUM this morning.

[Anonymous]

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Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!

well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.

Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.

? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).

What girl? Do you have a link? Does anybody ever provide some proof, good or bad?

Here's the essay. I'll bet a few readers here have no clue who are Pavlov's dogs which demonstrates the student was well read. Humorous essay.

https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/grade-point/wp/2017/06/04/the-papa-johns-pizza-admissions-essay-that-yale-loved/?utm_term=.5293d08a37bb#annotations:11961494

And she got free pizzas and an internship. Very smart, very slick!

[Anonymous]

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Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!

well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.

Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.

? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).

In addition to the essay, reading 100 books in the last year MAY have had a lot to do with her acceptance.

[Anonymous]

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Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!

well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.

Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.

? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).

In addition to the essay, reading 100 books in the last year MAY have had a lot to do with her acceptance.

so you can claim you read 100 books and that will help you get into a good college? Thanks that's a good tip.

[Anonymous]

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Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!

well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.

Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.

? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).

In addition to the essay, reading 100 books in the last year MAY have had a lot to do with her acceptance.

so you can claim you read 100 books and that will help you get into a good college? Thanks that's a good tip.

You don't like smart people, do you? It's obvious no matter how you try and spin it. To each his own, I guess.

[Anonymous]

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Anonymous wrote:

Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!

well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.

Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.

? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).

In addition to the essay, reading 100 books in the last year MAY have had a lot to do with her acceptance.

so you can claim you read 100 books and that will help you get into a good college? Thanks that's a good tip.

You don't like smart people, do you? It's obvious no matter how you try and spin it. To each his own, I guess.

I like smart people. Is there any way to verify she read 100 books? I will bet now that many people claim this on their apps next year since it worked so well for her.