Perfect characters...
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Anonymous
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“Too perfect to be in the situation she is in” -it’s really hard to understand what this means.
Can you give some hypothetical analogous situations? Describe a situation different but similar to the one your character is in and tell us how your perfect character would react and we’ll let you know what you think. |
Anonymous
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These are interesting questions.
But I can't tell if your friend's feedback was unclear, or if you just didn't like her feedback. I don't have to like the main characters, but I want to feel some connection or empathy toward them. |