College essay? Student can probably figure it out. |
It’s so bad. Makes everything passive. |
| Kid's brain. |
| Ugh. Don't use AI. A human is much better at this. Keep going over it pass by pass. |
Best tool: your brain. Tell the kid to figure it out. Lazy |
| Red pencil in your student’s hand. |
| Best tool=your brain. Put the essay away for a day. Then Reread |
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Recommend that your child go to the college writing center.
If this is for an college application, put the essay aside for at least 1 full day. Pick it up and read it fresh. Ask - what do I want the reader to know from this paragraph? Are all paragraphs necessary? What points are weaker and can be eliminated? |
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Read "The Elements of Style" (old skool)
or this https://www.axios.com/smart-brevity |
wtf? Seriously? You need AI to cut 33 words? |
Another vote for your brain |
| A brain. |