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Do the employees have enough subject knowledge to provide clear summaries, narratives, etc.? Do they have enough time to put aside a first or second draft for a day, to them come back to it with fresh eyes? Have you provided an exemplar?
Truthfully, it takes a lot of restraint to not edit work to make it sound like you wrote it. Could you pull back a little and let perfectly adequate work stand rather than be rewritten? |
| Thanks for the suggestions!! |
Yes, I don't do line edits through an entire document, at least first time around, if it's a mess. I use comment bubbles: Run-on sentence - comment says: "Can you please review throughout for grammar, including run-on sentence, punctuation, abbreviations not spelled out, etc.?" Organization: "The reader of this is someone new to this topic. Can you reread with that lens and reorganize and add more details as needed." Readability: "I'm not following how this section connects to the previous. Can you edit do ensure your key points are clear to a new reader?" Etc. I have had good luck with this approach, because people don't like having to redo it. You might be making it too easy for them to just accept your edits and move on, without reflecting on them. For some staff, I also have them to an outline of a document, so we can catch bigger issues early on. |
+1 I'm a fed attorney & supervisor. A lot of my job is reviewing work products from my team. Things they are writing to share with peer client just go out - I don't need to see or micromanage stuff (and that's the bulk of their work). If it's something going to higher-ups, then yes I review. But they are competent and good writers so I'm not editing for every minor thing, more like sharing thoughts on organization, what to highlight etc. |
| Ha. I was an actual editor my first 10 years out of college before switching career fields. I have been the de facto writer for every boss I've had since then. Some people just can't write. |
Depends on if you take something else off their plate. If you have a couple terrific writers on staff and everyone else needs a lot of help, I'd make the two writers your assistant editors (doing something they already excel at) and give some of their other work to someone else. Most people have some stuff on their list that is administrative and anyone could do -- give that work to the people on staff who aren't as good at the stuff that requires more skill. And bonus, the people you are elevating into this role are getting valuable experience that can go on a resume for a promotion or another job. Most competent workers will embrace that. This is what management is. Delegating, allocating resources, facilitating your team to do their best work. Right now OP is essentially doing his or her team's work themself. That's inefficient and doesn't play to anyone's strengths. |
I'm the editor above. Your logic is understandable, except it's poaching my skill set for skills I'm not paid for. I'm paid to do X, not paid to do X AND write the company letter, handle my boss's high level correspondence and stand behind him trying to catch all of his grammatical errors (many). It's shocking how many 'educated' people don't know the proper use of a semicolon, how to use a comma, the difference between effect and affect, their and there, and on and on. |
DP and it shouldn't - if writing well is an essential part of the job then these two people are excelling and if they are capable of being managers then they should move up the chain more quickly. |
Just a note that the best writers aren't always the best editors. I once had an employee whose writing was indifferent at best, but who could really pick apart others' writing in ways that were on point. I frequently outsourced review to him. |
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Excellent writing skills seem to be an essential requirement for the job. It appears that they are not meeting this requirement.
Your boss is unhappy, you are unhappy, even these employees are certainly unhappy. The solution is simple. You fire them and you hire people with excellent writing skills. |
I'm not sure this is true. If it's regular developmental editing, that's an "I would have approached this entire problem in a different way" issue more than a quality of writing issue. You can say that avoidance of errors is a required metric, but organizing your thoughts in the way your boss would is not, and some projects are improved by that kind of collaboration rather than being a flaw of the writer. If that is a major role that needs to be played and it's taking OP away from more critical work, maybe there's a business case for hiring a full time person for it, or transitioning someone into it. |