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[quote=Anonymous][quote=Anonymous]OP here. Thanks for all the advice! I revised it. What do you think?

" Hi! I have devoted 9+ years to working with children, including multiples, premature, and special needs. My experience with children from ages 0 to 4 have allowed me to put me to use my ECD background and put my theory into practice through all the typical milestones -- establishing routines, sleep training (for those who utilize), potty training, baby sign language, etc. I am reliable, active, and very organized.

I am dedicated to providing exceptional care and building a loving bond. I am passionate about participating in enriching activities (tummy time, reading, walks, classes etc.)  because I love to watch them grow and learn. I am adapted to various styles of child rearing, and I am happy to work with parents to meet their needs. I'm adept at handling miscellaneous tasks ( love making homemade baby food!), and I am committed to supporting the well-being of the family!

I am seeking a full-time nanny position with an infant or toddler that will enable me to grow with a family long-term."[/quote]

1. I found a typo 
2. You only have one theory? 
3. You have an early childhood background. But do you have a degree? If so, say that and say which degree specifically. 
4. You start every single sentence with "I" or "My". [/quote]

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