Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:But what if a kid has more rare interests .. classics/acheology/history/russian literature. They way its all pulled together is less likely to look packaged just bc its more rarely seen (then lets say econ/business kids)
Hard to pull off without seeming like a fake out who is going to change his major to Business or CS a month into the school year.
Anonymous wrote:I think this is a real thing. When a student sounds robotic and everything ties together in a perfect little bow, they lack personality and, most important, grit.
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:People, so many of you are getting this wrong.
Here’s an example:
Candidate A: 4.0 UW, 1520 SAT. High rigor in all subjects. Applying for economics. ECs are president of school finance club, VP Deca club, interned in something business related, one varsity sport, started a business, writes essay about things they learned from their business, published a random research thing on an economic issue, statements from school counselor and teachers are in line with this narrative. This is a well-packaged candidate. ECs support the major and there is a clear path for this candidate in their major. But this is arguably very boring profile
Candidate B. 4.0 uw. 1520 SAT. High rigor in all subjects. Applying for economics. President of school finance club, appeared in several productions in the school play, wrote for the literary journal, worked as a welder in summer, had random hobby x that has nothing to do with economics, writes something meaningful about random hobby. ECs vaguely support the major, not as packaged as Candidate A. Feels more like a real person with interests rather than a package to maximize admission to a specific major.
Question is whether candidate B does better than Candidate A.
There are a lot of variations of this
Welding adds blue collar street cred. Lol. Gets picked because AO's dad is a welder.
Absolutely doesn’t get picked because if AO’s dad is a welder, they would realize you have to be at least 18 to to be a welder because it is classified as a dangerous job. If you are under 18, you are never getting a work permit to be one, no company would hire you because of the liability.
So many of these scenarios are so unrealistic. Not buying some was in several productions of the school play, writes literary journal and is a welder. No one is in band and choir and glee club AND has time for cross country and basketball.
Unless you are at a small school basketball is a hard sport to play all 4 years to not only make the team as s freshman but then never get cut since the roster is so small. Unless a student is winning national martial arts events, no AO is going to be impressed if a student says they are a black belt since so many places hand out black belts. Many kids doing martial arts that many years are quirky and a AO would much rather pick the 4 year basketball player because it is a team sport.
I look at over packaged when students are doing a common instrument like violin /piano, play tennis /golf, have high level of math/math competitions, science competitions, volunteer at hospital or lab, summer STEM internships, President of some school clubs, student government.
The kids I know did very well in math/science/music competitions, played their instrument to a high level, tutored many children for a legitimate organization and had an important, paid, administrative role at the end, and/or were selected for prestigious summer research internships. Not all of those things at once, but let's say 3 of those per kid. They did not play sports at a high level nor were they President of school clubs or part of student government.
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:People, so many of you are getting this wrong.
Here’s an example:
Candidate A: 4.0 UW, 1520 SAT. High rigor in all subjects. Applying for economics. ECs are president of school finance club, VP Deca club, interned in something business related, one varsity sport, started a business, writes essay about things they learned from their business, published a random research thing on an economic issue, statements from school counselor and teachers are in line with this narrative. This is a well-packaged candidate. ECs support the major and there is a clear path for this candidate in their major. But this is arguably very boring profile
Candidate B. 4.0 uw. 1520 SAT. High rigor in all subjects. Applying for economics. President of school finance club, appeared in several productions in the school play, wrote for the literary journal, worked as a welder in summer, had random hobby x that has nothing to do with economics, writes something meaningful about random hobby. ECs vaguely support the major, not as packaged as Candidate A. Feels more like a real person with interests rather than a package to maximize admission to a specific major.
Question is whether candidate B does better than Candidate A.
There are a lot of variations of this
Welding adds blue collar street cred. Lol. Gets picked because AO's dad is a welder.
Anonymous wrote:Ladies, we get it, right? This is the college app equivalent of going for a "natural look": That means no obvious contouring or "work done" -- but for heaven's sake, please do not misunderstand "natural" to mean "no makeup." Look your best, but keep things understated, ok?
We're going for a NATURAL LOOK. Be packaged -- just don't be OBVIOUS about it!
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Well, think about it. You have two applicants. Applicant A has high grades and scores and was in band, debate team, choir, environmental club, glee club, art club, science club, toastmasters for teens, DECA, basketball, track, Spanish club, yearbook, cross country, volunteered for a local marathon, volunteers at an animal shelter once a month, likes anime and drawing. Applicant two also has high grades and decent test scores. This applicant is a double black belt in Taekwondo after taking it consistently for twelve years, assists in teaching taekwondo class to littles on Saturday mornings and mentors and inspires them as a Wednesday volunteer math tutor at the dojo during after school care, is in orchestra as first chair cello and plays in a fun quartet on the side, has taken Latin all four years of HS which was hard, is a member of a local "make it" organization that makes robots that compete in local and regional competitions, applicant's team of four placed second at a recent regional meet. That's applicant two's resume in total. Which applicant gives you a better idea of who they are as a person on first read? Who seems more attached to very specific interests over time that tell a simple story and offers a concrete through line as to what the person is all about? I think it's pretty clear.
What is a double black belt in Taekwondo? Do you mean black belt 2nd Dan? If so, that is not impressive at all after 12 years of practice. DC was black belt 4th Dan Taekwondo after 12 years of practice. Was nationally ranked in another NCAA varsity sport and recruited at a T-10 private. Decided to take a full ride in a T-20 private.
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:But what if a kid has more rare interests .. classics/acheology/history/russian literature. They way its all pulled together is less likely to look packaged just bc its more rarely seen (then lets say econ/business kids)
Hard to pull off without seeming like a fake out who is going to change his major to Business or CS a month into the school year.
Anonymous wrote:But what if a kid has more rare interests .. classics/acheology/history/russian literature. They way its all pulled together is less likely to look packaged just bc its more rarely seen (then lets say econ/business kids)