Anonymous wrote:
Anonymous wrote:Fleishman is in Trouble. I wondered if the author hadn’t been in the industry, it never would have gotten published let alone received rave reviewed from industry insiders.
This was DNF for me. I love her profiles and was genuinely sorry I couldn’t cope with Toby.
Maybe the balance was off? Most of the book was about Toby, and it was also kind of pointless. What did Toby want, what was the big motivation? Hot sex, to get Rachel back, to settle into his new life--I couldn't make myself care about any of these, as a divorced woman whose teenager chose to live with her, it was a big BTDT. The Rachel section was an interesting twist, but it was maybe 1/4 of the book and the way she stuck Toby with the kids undermined any sympathy I felt for her. I get it, the big climax is supposed to happen 3/4 of the way through. But then you're supposed to head down the path of a satisfactory denouement, and this wasn't it.