Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:34
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
Anonymous wrote:You don't like smart people, do you? It's obvious no matter how you try and spin it. To each his own, I guess.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:In addition to the essay, reading 100 books in the last year MAY have had a lot to do with her acceptance.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!
well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.
? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).
so you can claim you read 100 books and that will help you get into a good college? Thanks that's a good tip.
I like smart people. Is there any way to verify she read 100 books? I will bet now that many people claim this on their apps next year since it worked so well for her.
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:31
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
You don't like smart people, do you? It's obvious no matter how you try and spin it. To each his own, I guess.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:In addition to the essay, reading 100 books in the last year MAY have had a lot to do with her acceptance.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!
well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.
? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).
so you can claim you read 100 books and that will help you get into a good college? Thanks that's a good tip.
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:24
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
Anonymous wrote:In addition to the essay, reading 100 books in the last year MAY have had a lot to do with her acceptance.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!
well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.
? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).
so you can claim you read 100 books and that will help you get into a good college? Thanks that's a good tip.
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:22
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
In addition to the essay, reading 100 books in the last year MAY have had a lot to do with her acceptance.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!
well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.
? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:19
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
And she got free pizzas and an internship. Very smart, very slick!Anonymous wrote:Here's the essay. I'll bet a few readers here have no clue who are Pavlov's dogs which demonstrates the student was well read. Humorous essay.Anonymous wrote:What girl? Do you have a link? Does anybody ever provide some proof, good or bad?Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!
well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.
? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).
https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/grade-point/wp/2017/06/04/the-papa-johns-pizza-admissions-essay-that-yale-loved/?utm_term=.5293d08a37bb#annotations:11961494
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:18
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
Anonymous wrote:Huh? I KNOW you aren't casting stones! LOL!!!Anonymous wrote:I am sure we'll soon hear how somebody included their pint rest page instead of an essay and got into Harvard. And it was of Obama and Trump photos facing each other... Or some other copy and paste "contemporary art." College admission is becoming enchanted with nonsensical just as our society is today.
I aim to please! LOL. Glad that smart are en force on DCUM this morning.
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:17
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
Done.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:What girl? Do you have a link? Does anybody ever provide some proof, good or bad?Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!
well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.
? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).
c'mon. Google it. This came out a couple of months ago.
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:17
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
Here's the essay. I'll bet a few readers here have no clue who are Pavlov's dogs which demonstrates the student was well read. Humorous essay.Anonymous wrote:What girl? Do you have a link? Does anybody ever provide some proof, good or bad?Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!
well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.
? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).
https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/grade-point/wp/2017/06/04/the-papa-johns-pizza-admissions-essay-that-yale-loved/?utm_term=.5293d08a37bb#annotations:11961494
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:16
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
Anonymous wrote:What girl? Do you have a link? Does anybody ever provide some proof, good or bad?Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!
well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.
? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).
c'mon. Google it. This came out a couple of months ago.
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:14
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
What girl? Do you have a link? Does anybody ever provide some proof, good or bad?Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!
well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.
? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:13
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
If that happens, those who have the gold make the rules. In addition to us, will you be reaching out to Harvard to vigorously let them know how disenchanted you are at this behavior?Anonymous wrote:Huh? I KNOW you aren't casting stones! LOL!!!Anonymous wrote:I am sure we'll soon hear how somebody included their pint rest page instead of an essay and got into Harvard. And it was of Obama and Trump photos facing each other... Or some other copy and paste "contemporary art." College admission is becoming enchanted with nonsensical just as our society is today.
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:12
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
Anonymous wrote:Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!
well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.
? The girl got into Yale. (p.s. I can't confirm the pappa john's essay actually had grammatical errors; I'm just going by the pp's assertion that it did).
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:07
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
Bonus points? The adcoms will assume she can't write. Sorry but there are no brownie points for this.Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!
well at least the admit comms can assume with those grammatical mistakes that she wrote the essay herself. Bonus points there.
Otherwise how will they know who wrote it?
I imagine they are tired of high school kids sounding like professional writers or reading essays that sound like something Ph.D.'s wrote.
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:05
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
Huh? I KNOW you aren't casting stones! LOL!!!Anonymous wrote:I am sure we'll soon hear how somebody included their pint rest page instead of an essay and got into Harvard. And it was of Obama and Trump photos facing each other... Or some other copy and paste "contemporary art." College admission is becoming enchanted with nonsensical just as our society is today.
Anonymous
06/25/2017 11:03
Subject: College Essays Are An Important Factor
Amateur hour is over. To the intelligent reader, grammar mistakes are no joke on a college essay. It may not be a final death knell but will certainly raise an eyebrow.Anonymous wrote:Also when you write about papa johns make sure to make lots of grammatical mistakes. Admit comms appear to love that!!!
https://www.c2educate.com/blog/10-grammar-mistakes-that-hurt-college-apps-and-all-other-writing/
https://www.princetonreview.com/college-advice/college-essay-grammar-checklist