Anonymous wrote:People, so many of you are getting this wrong.
Here’s an example:
Candidate A: 4.0 UW, 1520 SAT. High rigor in all subjects. Applying for economics. ECs are president of school finance club, VP Deca club, interned in something business related, one varsity sport, started a business, writes essay about things they learned from their business, published a random research thing on an economic issue, statements from school counselor and teachers are in line with this narrative. This is a well-packaged candidate. ECs support the major and there is a clear path for this candidate in their major. But this is arguably very boring profile
Candidate B. 4.0 uw. 1520 SAT. High rigor in all subjects. Applying for economics. President of school finance club, appeared in several productions in the school play, wrote for the literary journal, worked as a welder in summer, had random hobby x that has nothing to do with economics, writes something meaningful about random hobby. ECs vaguely support the major, not as packaged as Candidate A. Feels more like a real person with interests rather than a package to maximize admission to a specific major.
Question is whether candidate B does better than Candidate A.
There are a lot of variations of this
Anonymous wrote:There is an overpacked kid to the nth degree at our school. Nobel prize winners are involved. This is a feeder private where consultant curation and nepotism are not uncommon and even then this is an outlier, so everyone is waiting to see if this kid (a junior) will clean up with T10s next year. I’ll report back.
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Someone mentioned this in another thread.
What does an overpackaged application look like? Is it someone trying to tie everything together (to a major)?
Would love examples. I always thought you were supposed to try and tie everything together and create a thread, but maybe that looks over packaged?
You will get a lot of different opinions about this, but we have heard from some school admissions offices for schools we toured that they feel like they get the same 10-15 profiles over and over - the business school applicant with a curated set of extracurriculars that neatly tie everything together, the engineering applicant, the English applicant, etc. So there is a feeling among some admissions officers that these applicants don’t feel like real people anymore and they prefer profiles that aren’t as carefully packaged, but seem more “real.” What percentage of the AO”s have this view is anyone’s guess. But there is definite fatigue of everyone doing the same consultant influenced packaged profile.
Would this mean that an applicant similarly overpackaged, but for a niche and more obscure major, would still do well?
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Someone mentioned this in another thread.
What does an overpackaged application look like? Is it someone trying to tie everything together (to a major)?
Would love examples. I always thought you were supposed to try and tie everything together and create a thread, but maybe that looks over packaged?
You will get a lot of different opinions about this, but we have heard from some school admissions offices for schools we toured that they feel like they get the same 10-15 profiles over and over - the business school applicant with a curated set of extracurriculars that neatly tie everything together, the engineering applicant, the English applicant, etc. So there is a feeling among some admissions officers that these applicants don’t feel like real people anymore and they prefer profiles that aren’t as carefully packaged, but seem more “real.” What percentage of the AO”s have this view is anyone’s guess. But there is definite fatigue of everyone doing the same consultant influenced packaged profile.
Anonymous wrote:Well, think about it. You have two applicants. Applicant A has high grades and scores and was in band, debate team, choir, environmental club, glee club, art club, science club, toastmasters for teens, DECA, basketball, track, Spanish club, yearbook, cross country, volunteered for a local marathon, volunteers at an animal shelter once a month, likes anime and drawing. Applicant two also has high grades and decent test scores. This applicant is a double black belt in Taekwondo after taking it consistently for twelve years, assists in teaching taekwondo class to littles on Saturday mornings and mentors and inspires them as a Wednesday volunteer math tutor at the dojo during after school care, is in orchestra as first chair cello and plays in a fun quartet on the side, has taken Latin all four years of HS which was hard, is a member of a local "make it" organization that makes robots that compete in local and regional competitions, applicant's team of four placed second at a recent regional meet. That's applicant two's resume in total. Which applicant gives you a better idea of who they are as a person on first read? Who seems more attached to very specific interests over time that tell a simple story and offers a concrete through line as to what the person is all about? I think it's pretty clear.
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:The A+B examples are relevant to this entire discussion. That poster got sidetracked.
Is there a specific example of an over packaged applicant? Maybe those Polygence or Pioneer research pay to play programs.
Not sure what else screams packaging.
"Packaged" is like "woke". They're terms that were created to prejudge someone negatively. It's hard to define them, since they might mean something a little different to each person. But to me, packaged means that I can tell someone was guiding the applicant to try and inflate their worth and it's a little too obvious. The really valuable candidates might or might not be strategically advised by an adult, but it's fine regardless since they achieve really wonderful things. The "packaged" ones are the ersatz who try to look like highly valuable candidates but you can see through the cracks that they're not. As you said, maybe their resume has pay-to-play programs made to look like highly selective experiences. Maybe there's a recommendation by a Senator, who clearly doesn't know the kid very well. Overpackaged means their profile is full of stuff like that, and it gets offensive. Like, who do they take the admissions officer for?
Anonymous wrote:The A+B examples are relevant to this entire discussion. That poster got sidetracked.
Is there a specific example of an over packaged applicant? Maybe those Polygence or Pioneer research pay to play programs.
Not sure what else screams packaging.
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Well, think about it. You have two applicants. Applicant A has high grades and scores and was in band, debate team, choir, environmental club, glee club, art club, science club, toastmasters for teens, DECA, basketball, track, Spanish club, yearbook, cross country, volunteered for a local marathon, volunteers at an animal shelter once a month, likes anime and drawing. Applicant two also has high grades and decent test scores. This applicant is a double black belt in Taekwondo after taking it consistently for twelve years, assists in teaching taekwondo class to littles on Saturday mornings and mentors and inspires them as a Wednesday volunteer math tutor at the dojo during after school care, is in orchestra as first chair cello and plays in a fun quartet on the side, has taken Latin all four years of HS which was hard, is a member of a local "make it" organization that makes robots that compete in local and regional competitions, applicant's team of four placed second at a recent regional meet. That's applicant two's resume in total. Which applicant gives you a better idea of who they are as a person on first read? Who seems more attached to very specific interests over time that tell a simple story and offers a concrete through line as to what the person is all about? I think it's pretty clear.
What is a double black belt in Taekwondo? Do you mean black belt 2nd Dan? If so, that is not impressive at all after 12 years of practice. DC was black belt 4th Dan Taekwondo after 12 years of practice. Was nationally ranked in another NCAA varsity sport and recruited at a T-10 private. Decided to take a full ride in a T-20 private.
Both of you are missing the point of this thread and no one cares about taekwondo
What's the point?
Applicant A was a generic in-school overachiever. Had they played the ukulele, they might have had a shot?
No... the point is that A is not an overachiever at all. Participation in many clubs is meaningless. They are scattered and distracted and this is not a good look. The point is that B is much more likely to be picked than A (and neither are Ivy League material, to be clear).
A isn't overpackaged though. Just scattered. Big big difference
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Well, think about it. You have two applicants. Applicant A has high grades and scores and was in band, debate team, choir, environmental club, glee club, art club, science club, toastmasters for teens, DECA, basketball, track, Spanish club, yearbook, cross country, volunteered for a local marathon, volunteers at an animal shelter once a month, likes anime and drawing. Applicant two also has high grades and decent test scores. This applicant is a double black belt in Taekwondo after taking it consistently for twelve years, assists in teaching taekwondo class to littles on Saturday mornings and mentors and inspires them as a Wednesday volunteer math tutor at the dojo during after school care, is in orchestra as first chair cello and plays in a fun quartet on the side, has taken Latin all four years of HS which was hard, is a member of a local "make it" organization that makes robots that compete in local and regional competitions, applicant's team of four placed second at a recent regional meet. That's applicant two's resume in total. Which applicant gives you a better idea of who they are as a person on first read? Who seems more attached to very specific interests over time that tell a simple story and offers a concrete through line as to what the person is all about? I think it's pretty clear.
What is a double black belt in Taekwondo? Do you mean black belt 2nd Dan? If so, that is not impressive at all after 12 years of practice. DC was black belt 4th Dan Taekwondo after 12 years of practice. Was nationally ranked in another NCAA varsity sport and recruited at a T-10 private. Decided to take a full ride in a T-20 private.
Both of you are missing the point of this thread and no one cares about taekwondo
What's the point?
Applicant A was a generic in-school overachiever. Had they played the ukulele, they might have had a shot?
No... the point is that A is not an overachiever at all. Participation in many clubs is meaningless. They are scattered and distracted and this is not a good look. The point is that B is much more likely to be picked than A (and neither are Ivy League material, to be clear).
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Well, think about it. You have two applicants. Applicant A has high grades and scores and was in band, debate team, choir, environmental club, glee club, art club, science club, toastmasters for teens, DECA, basketball, track, Spanish club, yearbook, cross country, volunteered for a local marathon, volunteers at an animal shelter once a month, likes anime and drawing. Applicant two also has high grades and decent test scores. This applicant is a double black belt in Taekwondo after taking it consistently for twelve years, assists in teaching taekwondo class to littles on Saturday mornings and mentors and inspires them as a Wednesday volunteer math tutor at the dojo during after school care, is in orchestra as first chair cello and plays in a fun quartet on the side, has taken Latin all four years of HS which was hard, is a member of a local "make it" organization that makes robots that compete in local and regional competitions, applicant's team of four placed second at a recent regional meet. That's applicant two's resume in total. Which applicant gives you a better idea of who they are as a person on first read? Who seems more attached to very specific interests over time that tell a simple story and offers a concrete through line as to what the person is all about? I think it's pretty clear.
What is a double black belt in Taekwondo? Do you mean black belt 2nd Dan? If so, that is not impressive at all after 12 years of practice. DC was black belt 4th Dan Taekwondo after 12 years of practice. Was nationally ranked in another NCAA varsity sport and recruited at a T-10 private. Decided to take a full ride in a T-20 private.
Both of you are missing the point of this thread and no one cares about taekwondo
What's the point?
Applicant A was a generic in-school overachiever. Had they played the ukulele, they might have had a shot?