Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 16:01     Subject: Grammar experts, please help!

Become.

If you need creds, I have a doctorate in linguistics and I used to work for the dictionary ...
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:59     Subject: Grammar experts, please help!

I would write it like this:

They have expressed a desire to apply once programs become available in their communities.
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:57     Subject: Grammar experts, please help!

If it ALL had happened in the past (i.e. they had expressed the desire AND the programs had already become available), then I would go with became. But in your case, I think it should be become. It is not past subjunctive but rather future/uncertain subjective, right? (Kind of like "if I were a rich man"?)
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:56     Subject: Grammar experts, please help!


Become.

Became would indicate that they are available at the time you are writing this.
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:42     Subject: Grammar experts, please help!

Generally, you want to stick to the same tense within a sentence. So, "became." Or change "expressed" to "express" and use "become."
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:41     Subject: Re:Grammar experts, please help!

*sentence*
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:40     Subject: Re:Grammar experts, please help!

another vote for "become"
think of it this way: your sentance could also be:

"They expressed a desire to apply when programs will (BECAME/BECOME) available in their communities."

it means the same thing and you wouldn't say "will became" available.
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:21     Subject: Grammar experts, please help!

Become.
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:19     Subject: Grammar experts, please help!

Another example:

Yesterday or today, that movie you hate became available on DVD.

Tomorrow, your favorite movie will BECOME available on DVD.
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:12     Subject: Grammar experts, please help!

BECOME!!!!!!! - became is past tense - they aren't planning to apply when the programs "became" available - see. changing the order of the words makes it more obvious.

If you were talking in the past tense, that someone previously applied for something when the programs "became" available - again, this works when talking about the past - not the present or future.
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:10     Subject: Grammar experts, please help!

Wanted to add that it would be "become" if expressed changed to "express".
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:09     Subject: Grammar experts, please help!

Become, if the programs are not yet available.
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:09     Subject: Grammar experts, please help!

Agree with pp. It's "became".

Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:09     Subject: Re:Grammar experts, please help!

Became available.

Past subjunctive tense.
Anonymous
Post 03/12/2012 15:08     Subject: Grammar experts, please help!

I've gone back and forth on this sentence, and I can't figure out which verb tense for "become" is appropriate:

"They expressed a desire to apply when programs (BECAME/BECOME) available in their communities."

The programs are not yet available, if that helps figuring the right tense. Any insight? Thanks.