Anonymous wrote:Anyone read this recently? I liked the part that took place in the 1800s, but really felt like the modern-day story line fell flat. I felt like most of the interactions were forced to make a point, as opposed to having any real feeling or depth.
Curious to hear what others thought.
Anonymous wrote:jsmith123 wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anyone read this recently? I liked the part that took place in the 1800s, but really felt like the modern-day story line fell flat. I felt like most of the interactions were forced to make a point, as opposed to having any real feeling or depth.
Curious to hear what others thought.
This is my overall impression of Brooks as a writer—one-dimensional characters who are just there to advance an agenda. The thing is, I often agree with her agenda. If Horse is anti-racism, I’m all in. But these points could be made so much better by working them around complex characters and plotlines. I found People of the Book almost unreadable, for example. Brooks began as a journalist and she hasn’t learned the novelist’s skill of showing not telling.
Interesting that she started as a journalist. I love the point you made about showing vs. telling. I've had similar issues with other books/authors but never had anyone frame it that way.
I’m a journalist and showing rather than telling is a large part of the job. At the same time, I’ve enjoyed most of her books and haven’t had an issue with her character development. I haven’t had a chance to read Horse yet.
Anonymous wrote:I got about 30% into the book and stopped. I wanted to love this, but I never looked forward to reading it.
jsmith123 wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anyone read this recently? I liked the part that took place in the 1800s, but really felt like the modern-day story line fell flat. I felt like most of the interactions were forced to make a point, as opposed to having any real feeling or depth.
Curious to hear what others thought.
This is my overall impression of Brooks as a writer—one-dimensional characters who are just there to advance an agenda. The thing is, I often agree with her agenda. If Horse is anti-racism, I’m all in. But these points could be made so much better by working them around complex characters and plotlines. I found People of the Book almost unreadable, for example. Brooks began as a journalist and she hasn’t learned the novelist’s skill of showing not telling.
Interesting that she started as a journalist. I love the point you made about showing vs. telling. I've had similar issues with other books/authors but never had anyone frame it that way.
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anyone read this recently? I liked the part that took place in the 1800s, but really felt like the modern-day story line fell flat. I felt like most of the interactions were forced to make a point, as opposed to having any real feeling or depth.
Curious to hear what others thought.
This is my overall impression of Brooks as a writer—one-dimensional characters who are just there to advance an agenda. The thing is, I often agree with her agenda. If Horse is anti-racism, I’m all in. But these points could be made so much better by working them around complex characters and plotlines. I found People of the Book almost unreadable, for example. Brooks began as a journalist and she hasn’t learned the novelist’s skill of showing not telling.
Which characters/plotlines were one dimensional in People of the Book?
The only thing I didn't like about POTB was the ending. That felt contrived.
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anyone read this recently? I liked the part that took place in the 1800s, but really felt like the modern-day story line fell flat. I felt like most of the interactions were forced to make a point, as opposed to having any real feeling or depth.
Curious to hear what others thought.
This is my overall impression of Brooks as a writer—one-dimensional characters who are just there to advance an agenda. The thing is, I often agree with her agenda. If Horse is anti-racism, I’m all in. But these points could be made so much better by working them around complex characters and plotlines. I found People of the Book almost unreadable, for example. Brooks began as a journalist and she hasn’t learned the novelist’s skill of showing not telling.
Anonymous wrote:Anonymous wrote:Anyone read this recently? I liked the part that took place in the 1800s, but really felt like the modern-day story line fell flat. I felt like most of the interactions were forced to make a point, as opposed to having any real feeling or depth.
Curious to hear what others thought.
This is my overall impression of Brooks as a writer—one-dimensional characters who are just there to advance an agenda. The thing is, I often agree with her agenda. If Horse is anti-racism, I’m all in. But these points could be made so much better by working them around complex characters and plotlines. I found People of the Book almost unreadable, for example. Brooks began as a journalist and she hasn’t learned the novelist’s skill of showing not telling.
Anonymous wrote:Anyone read this recently? I liked the part that took place in the 1800s, but really felt like the modern-day story line fell flat. I felt like most of the interactions were forced to make a point, as opposed to having any real feeling or depth.
Curious to hear what others thought.