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[quote=Anonymous][quote=Anonymous][quote=Anonymous]Good lord do you really think your kids are the only good writers out there? Lots and lots and lots of kids are strong writers. Does kid have 5 on Eng Lang AP? In 700s for verbal SAT score?  Good Rec from English teacher? Then they’ll know your DC, just like 1000s of others, is a strong writer. Be grateful and move along. [/quote]

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The legacy of Pharaoh Ramses II is clear to all who live in Egypt. He has built great temples, statues, and monuments that show his power and devotion to the gods. His rule has brought strength and stability to the land. We are protected from enemies, and the kingdom is prosperous.I heard that he signed a peace treaty with the Hittites instead of waging war with them! Even though I will never meet him, I feel his presence in everything around me.
When I work on the temples during the flood season, I see the greatness of his vision. The massive stones, the carvings, and the statues are unlike anything I have ever seen. These structures will stand for generations, reminding all people of the power of Ramses II. I am proud to play a small part in his legacy, even if my name is never known.
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