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[quote=Anonymous][quote=Anonymous]Yikes, Mattie!

"Early on, I found myself weirded out by how much I enjoyed spending time with my students. I care about every one of them and want them to win in life. Fighting that will seems impossible, so I figured I may as well steer into the skid."[/quote]

I know...he is an awful writer. More examples:

"That does not mean I ever base an essay around it." - typo, should be NEVER.

Next sentence: "Instead, it tends to come briefly early on in a piece, which further directs the “real” story." typo, should be, "...it tends to come UP briefly..."

Those came from this page: https://www.collegewithmattie.com/do-not-write-about-mental-health-or-any-of-the-other-following-topics-in-your-college-application/

Then there's this 62-word sentence on this page: https://www.collegewithmattie.com/about/

"What makes me different is that I can write and edit at a professional level, I handle every aspect of the work and demand a high barrier of quality for everything I submit, I think differently and will give you advice no one else will, and I love what I do and enjoy every second I get to spend with kick-ass teenagers."

No one and I mean no one is paying this man thousands of dollars to help with college essays. Since someone in his corner posted his name to drum up business for him, I strongly suggest HE hires an essay coach to revise all of his online content. If he needs a recommendation, let us know.[/quote]

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