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[quote=Anonymous]Why are there quotations when nobody is talking? Why are you saying facts bore you then go into unnecessary detail about some random stranger? Why are you using traipsing around at work then eagerly talking to people. It’s a contradiction. Why are you lamenting to the co workers? About what? Over a guy at a grocery store? This makes zero sense. A serial killer? Weird. Some of it speculation? The entire ridiculous thing is speculation. At my job? How about at work or at the office? Nobody has a bulletin board full of local events at their office. Unless you’re actually an actress this sounds crazy. Noon sharp? Wtf Don’t table reads involve multiple actors? Who are you reading to/with? Acting classes in college but no auditions since high school? Really? I can’t…[/quote]
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