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[quote=Anonymous]Your story needs to be broken up into more paragraphs. Many more paragraphs. You need to introduce your main character. All I could figure out about your main character is that she works in an office, she graduated from high school 20 years ago, and she wears four inch heels. Where is this story set? Arizona? Maine? [/quote]
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