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[quote=Anonymous][quote=Anonymous][quote=Anonymous][quote=Anonymous]It’s not “honesty” that’s the problem, it’s that those kinds of stories tend to make dull, dreary essays. It’s an application essay, not a confessional. I would try to help dc brainstorm topics that have more to do with dc’s personality or interests or how he spends his time.[/quote]

I agree. It doesn't need to be cathartic for your kid to write it, it needs to be an inspiration for anyone reading it. So you need to be able to take a step back and look at the essay as objectively as possible. [/quote]

+2.  The advice I’ve heard on essays is to put yourself in the admission counselor’s position of reading thousands of essays and maybe having 5-7 minutes per admission packet.  Is this essay something you would want to read?  Also with good writing in general you hear to “show rather than tell the readers”.

There is a related but separate debate if you should even acknowledge mention mental health struggles or neurodiversity in the application.  I don’t know think my dd will include anything about that but if she does, at one of the college counseling sessions at her high school with a college admission counselor (not of a school she is applying to), the person mentioned that there is [b]usually a section if you want to provide additional information[/b].[/quote]

At the end of the FAFSA there's an additional information section, that's the appropriate place to discuss trajectory in GPA.  Don't weight down the essay with that.  The essay should highlight her current self.

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