Anonymous wrote:
Anonymous wrote:Op again, I am out of the marriage. I have heard it said that these women are "strong" which I take to mean courageous. I dont understand it, how you can sell your soul for "stuff" and appearances. But as I said , their lives are simpler, so maybe there is something I didnt get.
You really MUST learn to write clearly. Write so that others can understand. When you refer to something, make sure you defined it previously. Who are "these women"? Women who were cheated on who chose to stay married? "Adulterous" is an adjective, and therefore must precede a noun. Why are "these women"'s lives "simpler", OP? Why did you not explain that?
Stop making the reader do all the work. You were taught how to write in school. Don't backslide on DCUM.